Detoxing from methadone

You do know that mushrooms are hallucinogens don't you, and that you should have them identified correctly before ingestion? If you aren't careful enough, people start treating you like a mushroom and feeding you shit, but you don't realise it because you're in the dark! Somehow you must have eaten a bad one cobber!
Try detoxing on a bit of reality and resume your normal competent stance when writing - good luck!

When we started this journey I thought Ivan was going to break the mold and bring traditional Japanese values to Mr. Nice Guy. Fumiko gave Ivan her heart not just a piece of ass. On his flight back to the states he pondered how he could find her again, then you just dropped her from the story. You made Jean toxic after she married him and now we have Sarah detoxing him.
I personally liked the Fumiko story line, but now that it is three or four years later it would be hard to believe she is still waiting for her one night stand to return.
Til the next time I will be waiting.

You gutless wonder - I thought Kiwis wouldn’t hide in the bog using the name Anonymous. And who's ranting? You have identified yourself. You attack the author like a deranged person and not the story. What a creep. Just one of the vile vermin that has infiltrated Literotica; shame on you. And how dare you attack old men in wheelchairs. You need detoxing. Oh, if you do write and post on this site please identify to me your work and allow me the opportunity of rating your masterly work. EG

This feels a bit like a finale, doesn't it? I wouldn't mind if you moved on to other things, other characters and scenarios but I'm sure I'll enjoy anything you write.
The last few chapters had become a little too dark for my taste and I generally can't really enjoy actual hardcore raping, even if the protagonist enjoys it, but hey, that's just taste.
Other than that, I really enjoyed the natural flow with which your story progressed. Like her getting thrown in the dungeon was logical and not just done gratuitously. And I really loved the way she engineered her way out of it because even though it seemed impossible, it really wasn't an ex machina. The metal dildos were there, alluded to several times, and made sense for the story, so her using them to free herself and as a weapon just felt like satisfying closure on great foreshadowing. Yeah, Tony appearing out of nowhere was a bit of an ex machina, but still, she had freed herself from her shackles at least and subdued her captor, so her escape still felt earned.
Also loved the action scenes, although sometimes the guards felt a bit too much like red-shirts and Tony too much of a flawless super hero, but still, the action really took me in.
And yeah, the conclusion, that just had to happen. May be a bit cheesy, but sometimes that's alright, felt like nice detoxing from the sometimes sickening dungeon scenes ;-)
Yeah, really loved it, can't wait for future installments or other stories of yours!